The Unfettering


Blazing the path

Daring intimacy

big boys don’t cry, big boys don’t cry


Z Notes:  I return to this post having learned a great deal about the Cinquain form with gentle guidance from Colleen (many thanks!) and rewrite in order to honor her weekly challenge and to be true to my personal quest for bearing my vulnerability.  This is one poet’s process.  Here is my new Cinquain (hopefully) that still captures what I was attempting to express in the first one:


Hypnotic hip

Daring probing blazing

Unfettered mind adventure dance




A Cinquain for Colleen’s Weekly Challenge #64 using New & Experience synonymously.


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